‘I won’t take no for an answer,’ he said, smiling.
She shook her head, also smiling.
‘Come on. Just give me your number.’
‘Why?’
‘Why not?’
‘Because then you’ll want a date.’
He laughed. ‘And what’s wrong with that?’
She shrugged. It had been fun but that was all. Why ruin things by trying to make it something it wasn’t? Besides, he probably just wanted to get laid and was willing to wait.
‘I just want to see you again.’ He stepped closer to her, his eyes fixed on hers.
She, now aware of the silence surrounding them, of how alone they were, shook her head and tried to back away. He grabbed her wrist and smiled.
His hand was in her hair, bending her ear to his lips.
‘I won’t take no for an answer.’
Wow. Very powerful. The ending is on you before you know what to do, as was surely the intent. Well done.
Yikes! Maybe she should give him a knee to the groin instead.
I second Tim’s motion for a knee to the groin. Some people…
Or some mace to the face. Captivating writing.
Go with your instinct girl! Creepy and tightly written. Good flashing.
Thanks for the comments!
Eek. Rather sinister ending!